Talk:Typhoon Janis/GA1
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
I will be doing the review now. NoahTalk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
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- "and after an increase in thunderstorm activity, and on August 3, a tropical depression developed" Needs a slight adjustment. NoahTalk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
- "After tracking near Guam, Janis tracked generally westward" I would replace one of the tracks. NoahTalk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
- There is an inconsistency with numbers in the lead. Some two digit numbers are spelled out, while others are in numerical form. NoahTalk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
- Abbreviate acres and link to both measurements as people may be unfamiliar with them. NoahTalk 21:07, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
- "the JMA classified Janis into a severe tropical storm." should be 'as a STS'. NoahTalk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
- "Jannis brought winds gusting to 55 km/h (35 mph) and 64 mm (2.25 in) of rain in 24 hours to the island" which island? NoahTalk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
- "total occurred of 468 mm (18.4 in) at Nagaoka District." A bit jumbled here. NoahTalk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
- Please watch significant figures when converting from hectares to acres. For example, 7000 ha should convert to 20,000 ac. NoahTalk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
- "including Susaki, suffered a blackout after falling tress" Spelling. NoahTalk 21:32, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
- "Fukuoka Prefecture, including by three by falling glass" delete the first "by".
- Also have variations in numbers throughout the Japan section. There is a mix of word and numerical values for numbers 99 and lower.