Talk:Typhoon June (1984)

Typhoon June (1984) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: August 7, 2017. (Reviewed version).

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Did you know... that in 1984, Typhoon June killed 121 people in the Philippines?

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 19:30, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"In all, $7.5 million was donated to the nation in relief." Purely the cash count, or a total of all aid received in any form?

Second, clarified. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:46, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

In the infobox, I don't really understand how the 10-minute sustained winds measure could be higher than the 1-minute. I would think they would be at least equal.

The 1 min and 10 min estimates come from different sources. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:46, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"Typhoon June hit the Philippines shortly before Typhoon Ike would devastate the archipelago." In the lead it says "a few days before", here it says "soon", if you have a more specific timeframe it should be added in both places.

Added. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:46, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"...northern portion of the island chain were also suspended." Portions would be plural if we are talking about multiple islands.

Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:46, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

"One hundred-twenty-one people were killed..." There are only descriptions of a handful of deaths, any info on when/where/how the others perished?

Most of the press reports focused on Ike, so that info isn't as abundant as I'd like. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:46, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Also, any deaths or injuries in Hong Kong or mainland China?

No. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:46, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Good, detailed article here. Almost ready to go. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 19:30, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 19:46, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]