Talk:Typhoon Zola

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Review: May 22, 2018. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Typhoon Zola appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 20 July 2017 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that in 1990, Typhoon Zola flooded 420 houses in Japan?

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Note to self[edit]

Divide by 145 when dealing with Japanese yen. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 04:11, 27 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Typhoon Zola (1990)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:52, 20 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Guam should be linked in the first mention.
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
The track map differs from the prose. It did become extratropical over the Sea of Japan, but the map shows it tropical at that time.
- Track map is from JTWC so it's the usual JTWC vs JMA problem that springs up. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Use some pronouns to refer the storm other than "Zola".
- Changed two. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"7 people" Write out numbers less than ten.
- Yeah but I chose not to spell out "30". Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"Thirty-eight homes" This shouldn't be written out, to be consistent.

...or you can write out all the numbers in the sentence.

You don't start a sentence with a number. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

"Sixteen ships" Same here.

I mean you're correct here, but I had to stick a "a total of" to avoid the same problem :P Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

And in impact section.

The Yen sign should be used.
- Good call. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"Tropical Storm Winona, also assisted" Remove "also".
- This made no sense till I read the full context of the sentence :P Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:03, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:23, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review :D Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:05, 22 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]