Talk:USS Illinois (BB-7)/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:15, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:15, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
- One DAB and dead links to the photo sources.
- Fixed the dead links but the dab checker is apparently blocked at work - can you tell me which one it is?
- Chatham.
- Fixed.
- Chatham.
- Fixed the dead links but the dab checker is apparently blocked at work - can you tell me which one it is?
- Images appropriately licensed.
- Move horsepower to the power parameter.
- Done
- Tell the reader what kind of engines
- Done
- Swapped in a better link.
- Done
- Watch your conversion rounding 14 inch not being 354 mm, etc. And add a conversion in the main body for 13 inch guns. With a hyphen please.
- All should be fixed now
- four 21 in (530 mm) torpedo tubes in deck mounted torpedo launchers Isn't there some redundancy here?
- Certainly is.
- Link magazines
- Done
- How badly was she damaged in her collisions?
- Don't know - haven't been able to track down any significant details.
- So what did she do during WWI?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:58, 1 August 2015 (UTC)
- DANFS doesn't say anything about it - presumably was still used as a training ship. The ship's not mentioned at all in Jones's US Battleship Operations in World War I. Parsecboy (talk) 12:06, 3 August 2015 (UTC)
- Curiouser and curiouser. But no point in adding a presumably if there's no sourcing. Fix Chatham and we'll be done here.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:18, 3 August 2015 (UTC)
- DANFS doesn't say anything about it - presumably was still used as a training ship. The ship's not mentioned at all in Jones's US Battleship Operations in World War I. Parsecboy (talk) 12:06, 3 August 2015 (UTC)