Talk:Ugly (Sugababes song)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 17:30, 1 April 2012 (UTC) Hello, I will be reviewing this article. 17:13, 1 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thankyou, Calvin! Till I Go Home (talk) 07:37, 2 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Infobox[edit]

Resolved comments

Use {{duration|m=3|s=02}} and {{duration|m=3|s=50}}

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the extra tracklising for the album. It's not needed.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

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"who primarily produced Taller in More Ways." → Sounds like he got first say on producing the album. Change to "who produced the majority of Taller in More Ways.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

If you are going to have a quote in the lead then you need to put the source for it.

Done, Removed quote. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

link [[Music journalism|music critics]]

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do a slight c/e at the end.

Thanks. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Background and release[edit]

Resolved comments

Link Taller in more Ways the firs time.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

was an inspiration for the song. → remove "an"

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrics[edit]

Resolved comments

Need a much better rationale for the audio file. How long is it? What does it present to the listener?

Done. Expanded it. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I guess there's no much info for the composition but you've done well with what you have.

Critical reception[edit]

Resolved comments

"Ugly" has received positive reviews from music critics. → "Ugly" garnered positive reviews from music critics.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This section is very quotey, can you paraphrase some of them?
Could do with a bit of refining.

Chart performance[edit]

Resolved comments

This section needs work. Do you want me to c/e it?

Yes please. Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think you mean "chart performance" since you already reviewed the critical reception up there (above)? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:47, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Yes Lol. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:16, 17 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion - Music video[edit]

Resolved comments

Any reviews?

Nope. It was a pain to even get info about the music video itself. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Lol. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion - Live performances[edit]

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2006 alongside singles → as part of a set list, which included

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

You say that their performances were praised by critics, so can you say what the critics actually said?

Done. Quoted the critics' words. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Track listings[edit]

Resolved comments

Remove the release dates.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Single should not to be capitalised.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Play should not to be capitalised.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel[edit]

Resolved comments

Where are the credits adapted from? Write it instead of "Source"

Done. Wrote Discogs. If I get the album, I will change it. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hmm okay. Can't you try ASCAP or BMI? Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Charts - Weekly charts[edit]

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Please can you have marked up the table according to WP:ACCESS :)

Don't understand :S Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

You've done it lol. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It says 2005/06. There should be two separate tables, one for peaks in 2005, one for peaks in 2006.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Charts - Year-end charts[edit]

Resolved comments

Mark up the table according to WP:ACCESS. Look at S&M's for example.

What's mark up? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done it for you. Aaron • ^{You Da One}

Again, tables should be separated.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Release hsitory[edit]

Resolved comments

No issues :).

References[edit]

Resolved comments

Ensure titles aren't in complete capitcals
It is now Official Charts Company, without the "The"

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 7 is missing a publisher.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 29 is missing a publisher.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 30 is missing a publisher.

Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Unlinked ref 47's work and publisher parameters and link ref 13's.
I can't. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
iTunes references are perfect!

Summary[edit]

Good job, on hold for 7 days. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 21:58, 6 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All done :). passed. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks :) Till I Go Home (talk) 03:01, 18 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]