Talk:Virgin Islands at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Virgin Islands at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Hi Courcelles! I will complete a quick c/e of the article first. Feel free to revert any of the changes, as I will only make what I feel are non-controversial improvements. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Copyedit
  • Here is my copyedit.
Prose & MOS
  • The acronym USVI is not mentioned anywhere in the article. Please define in the first use of United States Virgin Islands (USVI).
  • Need consistent linking with Ivan Espinosa. he is linked in the infobox, but not the first use in the lead. Recommend if linking, per WP:DUPLINK, to link in the infobox, first time in the lead, and the table at the end.
  • Cerebral palsy is linked twice. Recommend removing second link. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:03, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Images
References
  • Reference 4 needs thew author Laura Hale.
  • Reference 5 needs "PARALYMPIC NEWS SERVICE" in the citation.
  • Reference 6 needs the author Andrew McGarry.
  • All other references look good. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:02, 31 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Overall