Talk:Vivo (Luis Miguel album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:32, 10 June 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• of the second leg of Amarte Es Un Placer Tour. → add "his" before the tour's title
• in a live audio CD format, DVD, and VHS format → in a live audio CD, DVD and VHS format
• were released as singles for the album → state "made available" here to avoid word repetition
• On its release → After its release
• link "critics" to Music journalism
• Miguel received several accolades including a Grammy → comma before "including"
• certified triple platinum+gold → certified triple Platinum and Gold

Infobox

• You need a more appropriate alt text for the cover where you describe what the user can see in the picture given

Background and release

• Place the audio sample on the left in the first paragraph
• live covers of "Y" and "La Bikina". → specify that these are her singles
• while the video album launched on → while the video album was launched on
• It is first Spanish-language live album → place "the" before "first"
• "La Bikina" was released as the lead single → say "was made available" here to avoid word repeition
• with Mexican Independence Day → "the" before "Mexican..."
• It peaked at two → you need to say "number two"

Critical reception

• On its release, Vivo → After its release
• state that the reviews were written by music critics and link them to Music journalism
• Please link AllMusic to its respective article and fix "Allmusic" to AllMusic in the reviews box
• and the mariachi songs. Torres concluded: "Miguel's → and the mariachi songs, concluding: "Miguel's
• Year of release for MTV Unplugged in brackets
• Same for El Alma al Aire
• Same for Paulina

Commercial performance

• Year of release for Mi Reflejo in brackets
• platinum → Platinum
• never shorten out United States to US; write "America" here to avoid word repetition
• link Recording Industry Association of America
• ninth bestselling → ninth best-selling
• In Argentina, Vivo debuted on the top → In Argentina, Vivio debuted atop the
• double platinum → double Platinum
• while the video received platinum certification → while the video received a Platinum certification
• triple platinum → triple Platinum
• the album was certified triple platinum+gold → the record was awarded Platinum and Gold
• a gold certification → a Gold certification

Track listing

• flawless ;)

Charts

• Fixed things here by myself

Certifications

• flawless ;)

Personnel

• Section should be placed before "Track listing"
• Well, I think the section is not needed; I mean, there are only two credited persons which are already included in the article's body

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 21.3% is super!

Links

• 1 problem here! Please fix!

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify the books, so I trust you with this!)
• No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

 On hold for 7 days! Great job, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:27, 10 June 2017 (UTC) Hey Cartoon network freak, I believe I've fixed all the issues you brought up. Just a couple things, I didn't understood what you meant by "specify that these are her singles". I assumed you meant to mention that both songs were released as singles from the album so I added that. Is the alt fine? I hard trouble coming up with a proper description so I did the best I could with it. And I agree with removing the personnel section. The only reason I made it a section is because I was hoping I could find the album booklet online, as I do not actually own it, and spot more personnels. But I couldn't find it so that's why I agree with your statement. Thanks for the review Cartoon network freak. If you ever need a Latin song article reviewed for GA, just let me know! Thanks again! Erick (talk) 20:13, 10 June 2017 (UTC)

• • Gladly passing this! Great job and congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:50, 10 June 2017 (UTC)

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