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A member of the Guild of Copy Editors, Dthomsen8, reviewed a version of this article for copy editing on July 2015. However, a major copy edit was inappropriate at that time because of the issues specified below, or the other tags now found on this article. Once these issues have been addressed, and any related tags have been cleared, please tag the article once again for {{copyedit}}. The Guild welcomes all editors with a good grasp of English. Visit our project page if you are interested in joining! Please address the following issues as well as any other cleanup tags before re-tagging this article with copyedit: awaiting deletion decision
This page should not be speedy deleted as an unambiguous copyright infringement, because... (I am a new user. I have since studied and consulted about the copyrights issue I've been heaving with the help of the Teahouse. I now have a much better understanding of these limitations. I have therefore made major changes to the text, and I hope to learn more about this process and continue to improve this page. Changes were made so that the current version is more original. Thanks in advance) --Alonhadas (talk) 21:22, 28 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Alonhadas, it's looking better, but the copyvio report still makes it very obvious that all you've done is change a few words from the original material. That's still a heavy paraphrase, and still not allowed. My suggestion would be to rewrite the draft, paragraph by paragraph, by deleting the current text and replacing it with content that you have written entirely by yourself. Primefac (talk) 07:31, 29 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]
