Talk:Who Do You Love? (Bo Diddley song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 18:06, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox[edit]
- The single cover image requires an alt description, but since this is more of a pic of the single, a caption will have to do, so please add one
Lead[edit]
- Please insert "recorded" in between "a song" and "by American rock and roll pioneer..."
- Did this song reach the record charts? I'm asking this because it sounds like you're inferring that, yet there's no "Charts" section
Background and lyrics[edit]
Paragraph 2[edit]
- I don't think mentioning the lyrics part from "I walked forty-seven miles..." To "Who do you love?" Is necessary; I'd remove it
Composition and recording[edit]
Paragraph 2[edit]
- "Bo Diddley's characteristic sound processing effects are on display -- echoey vocal and tremolo-laden rhythm electric guitar." --> "Bo Diddley's characteristic sound processing effects are on display, accompanied by echoey vocals and a tremolo-laden rhythm electric guitar."
Release and reception[edit]
- All great!
Renditions[edit]
Ronnie Hawkins and the Hawks[edit]
- "Except near the border in the Great Lakes area, the record was largely unnoticed in the US and did not appear on the Billboard charts." --> Unsourced
- "Except near the border in the Great Lakes area, the record was largely unnoticed in the US and did not appear on the Billboard charts." --> Remove "in the US" as mentioning it near the Great Lakes area already speaks of the United States
Quicksilver Messenger Service[edit]
- Fantastic work!
George Thorogood and the Destroyers[edit]
- Please add the release year after the album name Move It on Over in parentheses
Recognition and legacy[edit]
- It must have peaked at number five, not 105, as the Bubbling Under Hot 100 chart is only 25 positions and serves as an extension to the Hot 100; however, it doesn't necessarily mean 105, although it's implied
End of GA Review:[edit]
Great article with very minor changes. On hold for seven days to allow for changes. Thank you and good luck. Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 14:34, 23 June 2016 (UTC).