Talk:Why Does It Hurt So Bad/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:43, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

• Better to just say 1996 MTV Movie Awards

 Done

Composition

• Link R&B ballad.

 Done

• Questioning Pandora reliability, see on your talk.

Removed Pandora reference.  Done

Reception

"Sailed" isn't very common so put it in quotation marks

 Done

• TIME is a magazine so say of TIME not of the TIME

 Done

• To avoid using those brackets, say "...of TIME say Houston "particularly held her own," with a "masterly balance of pop zip and soulful melancholy."

 Done

• Put Shoop Shopp in quotations as it is a song.

 Done

Music video

• Most articles would say 1996 MTV Movie Awards.

 Done

Everything else unnoted sounds good ! Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:43, 27 December 2010 (UTC)