Talk:Willamette Valley Fruit Company

This article was nominated for deletion on 17 July 2015. The result of the discussion was keep.

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Reads like a personal essay or a family Christmas news letter, and not one of the ones you want to read. This is an encyclopedia, and probably the company is noteworthy enough for an article, but not for a bad article. I've rewritten the tone, and removed that tag, and added some categories and removed that tag. However, it still needs sources, and there are enough that can be used, and it needs to be written in an informative and newsworthy matter, not as a collection of personal advancements by those who created the company. If you send me a pie, I'll make the article nicer.... --Blechnic (talk) 03:47, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

What this article really needs is some references to third party. C. Williams (talk) 04:53, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, to make it clearer, third party references are needed. I'm sure they are available in the Salem papers, and could be found by someone eager to make it a good article on Wikipedia. Thanks, C. Williams for making it clearer what is needed. --Blechnic (talk) 04:56, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]