Talk:William D. Leahy/GA1
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 20:16, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
Will review in a few days. Hog Farm Talk 20:16, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
- Busier than expected, it'll probably be Thursday or Friday before I can get to this. Hog Farm Talk 03:52, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
- You'll be better off linking to United States Representative for Lynch's title than the more generic Congressman
- "He was given his first command, the gunboat Mariveles, a refitted vessel that had been captured from the Spanish" - what does the source say? DANFS claims that Mariveles was "purchased by the War Department in 1898" although it could well have been previously captured/surrendered in the Spanish-American War or the Philippine Revolution
- "was not sent to Europe due to teething problems" - can it be clarified what exactly "teething problems" are? At least in the US, "teething problems" generally refers to infants growing teeth
- Well, yes, but at the Hood it far more often referred to the idiomatic definition of teething troubles: "Problems that are to be expected with any new and untried product, system, or venture project." Added Wiktionary link. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:10, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
- "In this role, Leahy had safeguard American interests in Turkey" - missing a word but it could be one of several so I'll let you figure that out
- "As bureau chief, Leahy formed a good working relationship with the new Assistant Secretary of the Navy was Henry L. Roosevelt," - something is off with this
- "return to moderate Collaboration with the Axis Powers" - I'm not sure that collaboration should be capitalized here
- Can we get a brief gloss of what Operation Anakim was to have been, since there's just the redlink
- Ref 189 needs some citation formatting cleanup
- The Forbes ref is not reliable per WP:FORBESCON
- "Leahy was ineligible for the American Defense Service Medal, as he retired from the Navy in August 1939 and was recalled to active duty in May 1942. The medal was for active service from 8 September 1939 to 7 December 1941." - citation needed, and possibly not all that relevant?
- The MO S&T ref is showing as a deadlink for me
I think that's all from me. Hog Farm Talk 23:46, 9 June 2022 (UTC)