Talk:Woman of the Year (Parks and Recreation)

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Good articleWoman of the Year (Parks and Recreation) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 4, 2010Good article nomineeListed
January 18, 2011Good topic candidatePromoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 18, 2010.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the Parks and Recreation episode "Woman of the Year" mocked the meaninglessness of awards, which some critics saw as a jab about the show's failure to win major industry awards?
Current status: Good article

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 22:39, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this as part of April's GAN Backlog Elimination drive. It's good, but I'm placing it on hold until issues can be addressed. The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 22:39, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Very little issues here so I'll give some brief stuff; fix em and I'll pass it:

  • "believes is her congratulatory letter as the group's Woman of the Year award." → "letter as the recipient of the group's"
  • "who contributes $5,000. Tom still needs $1,000" → that math doesn't add up considering he needs $10,000 in total.
  • When does the girls' soccer team appear? The production mentions the coach of the team, but I don't see how he works into the plot.
    • It was part of a cold open that I didn't mention in the plot summary because it had little to do with the rest of the episode. I tried to explain it better in the production section. Let me know if this is better and if not, I'll add it to the plot section. — Hunter Kahn 23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • The t-shirt references are broken: they link to the main page of the site.
    • The t-shirts seem to have been removed from the site, so I took the references out altogether. — Hunter Kahn 23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "When Ron said he is attracted to strong and powerful women, Leslie admitted he attends a shocking number of Women's National Basketball Association games.[1][2]" Who says what now?
    • I tried to make this more clear. Let me know if it works. If not, feel free to remove the sentence altogether. — Hunter Kahn 23:38, 3 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In its original American NBC broadcast on March 4, 2010, "Galentine's Day" was seen[...]" Wrong episode title here ;)

Alright, thanks Hunter for taking care of the above issues, and as always brilliant work. I'm passing this. Cheers, The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 02:54, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]