Talk:Yugoslav torpedo boat T8/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:33, 23 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:33, 23 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • The bulk of my comments from Talk:Yugoslav torpedo boat T6/GA1 apply and have already been dealt with. In addition, I'd suggest applying them to the other Yugoslav TB articles that have already been done.
  • Link laid down, launched
  • Done.
  • One duplicate link
  • Removed.
  • WWI coverage is pretty skimpy. Did they escort any of the bigger ships on bombardment missions, etc.? Is there any mention of this TB or her sisters in the War in the Adriatic articles in Warship 2016 or Warship 2015?
  • I haven't looked at that series, but none of the other sources used mentioned her by name.
  • I only did a quick look through of my copies and I saw some references to various TBs, so it should be a priority to get access. If you can't find copies locally, I can scan the articles for you when I get home early next week.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:26, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'll need to go in to the state library (assuming they hold them), probably not going to happen this week. I'd appreciate any help you can offer. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:41, 15 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • WWII coverage not much better. Any mention in Rohwer's Chronology of the War at Sea?
  • No, I'm pretty sure I checked for all of these boats in Rohwer. There wasn't a lot of Allied activity in the Adriatic until quite late in the war, when British MTBs started operating from Italian ports.
  • Sturmvogel 66, 97 F obviously had a pretty quiet WWI, I've been through both Warship 2015 and 2016 and there is no direct mention of it in any engagement or action. There is a quite a lot on other ships of the class though, I'm adding info to the class article first, will then split out details to the individual boats of the class as relevant. So, I'm not sure there is much to add here. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:40, 27 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm forced to agree. Saw mention of her sisters, but not her.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:06, 28 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fix capitalization in title of Jarman 1997b
  • Done.
  • No DABs, external links OK.
  • Some of these comments will also apply to the other TB articles and they should all be updated accordingly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:17, 14 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]