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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 15:09, 23 April 2015 (UTC)

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Aubrey Dawkins, Muhammad Ali Abdur Rahkman[edit]

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Aubrey Dawkins Muhammad Ali Abdur-Rahkman

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 13:22, 10 March 2015 (UTC).

  • Muhammad Ali Abdur Rahkman: 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Image appears in article and is freely-licensed. Hook ref verified and cited inline. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:16, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
  • Aubrey Dawkins: New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Image appears in article and is freely-licensed. But I don't see the hook fact in the two cites given; neither says specifically that Dawkins filled LeVert's spot, as stated in your article. Yoninah (talk) 20:16, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
  • The article shows LeVert was lost for the season on Jan 17 and Dawkins started on Jan 20. Are you looking for a source that LeVert was a starter or something else? Would the starting lineup for the 17th be sufficient?--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:07, 22 April 2015 (UTC)
  • No. I'm saying that the hook is worded correctly, but the Dawkins article makes a direct connection between Dawkins replacing LeVert, which isn't in the sources. Perhaps you could tweak the article text? Yoninah (talk) 10:34, 22 April 2015 (UTC)
  • Regarding the choice of hooks, I think it would be cool to put both Dawkins' and Ali Abdur Rahkman's pictures side by side in the lead slot. I struck ALT2 because the third image doesn't appear in either of the DYK-nominated articles. Best, Yoninah (talk) 20:16, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
  • This nomination is good to go. I deleted the third picture to make it clearer for the prep builder. I'm not sure if I did the (pictured) parts correctly, but since ALT0 and ALT1 say the same thing, I struck ALT1. Yoninah (talk) 00:17, 23 April 2015 (UTC)
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