Template:Did you know nominations/Bernardo De Pace

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:53, 13 May 2018 (UTC)

Bernardo De Pace[edit]

Bernardo De Pace in Music Trades magazine in 1919
Bernardo De Pace in Music Trades magazine in 1919

Created/expanded by Jacqke (talk). Self-nominated at 19:57, 3 May 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.
Overall: The article could use more proof-reading, e.g. there was a typo of "Brooklin". I also had to do quite a bit of reformatting of the nomination and took the liberty of adding a picture, as we have one. I've reviewed the first hook, which seems the best. The source doesn't exactly say that but it's a reasonable way of putting it, I reckon. A QPQ doesn't seem needed but the nominator will have to start thinking about that soon. Note that I started a page on the BMG movement myself and so it's interesting to see more about this. Andrew D. (talk) 18:13, 4 May 2018 (UTC)