Template:Did you know nominations/Carol McNicoll

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 00:24, 26 November 2014 (UTC)

Carol McNicoll[edit]

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... that studio potter Carol McNicoll designed costumes for Brian Eno of Roxy Music?

Created by Theroadislong (talk). Self nominated at 11:13, 22 October 2014 (UTC).

New enough, long enough, no copyvio detected. No idea whether the nominator needs to a QPQ review. @Theroadislong:, can you please indicate whether you have had five or more DYKs already? As for the hook; is is fundamentally correct, but I would remove the "previously" and link or replace studio potter (Studio pottery or Ceramic art are suitable link targets I think). Finally, the source for the hook: [1] is a blog which doesn't mention "who was then her boyfriend" (the line directly before the source) anyway, and is not needed for the hook: there are much better sources, like this one or this one which mentions that they lived together. With some minimal changes (and perhaps a QPQ review if you have had too many DYKs already), this is good to go. Fram (talk) 11:18, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

I have had one other article nominated for DYK by another user. Do I make the changes to the hook here or elsewhere? Theroadislong (talk) 12:36, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Changes to the hook can be made here, changes to the article (sourcing) at the article of course. Thanks for the swift reply. Fram (talk) 12:57, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Fram (talk) 15:08, 24 November 2014 (UTC)