Template:Did you know nominations/Chiliques

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:22, 5 July 2017 (UTC)

Chiliques

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Chiliques from Laguna Miscanti

• ... that the Chilean volcano Chiliques (pictured) is of cultural importance to the town of Socaire, where it was considered to be the source of water?
  • ALT1:... that thermal anomalies were observed on the Chilean volcano Chiliques (pictured) from space and may reflect recent volcanic activity?

• Reviewed: Al-Insan

5x expanded by Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk). Self-nominated at 16:20, 4 June 2017 (UTC).

Interesting facts, a solid expansion on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I formatted pictured for you. Please read the article once more to yourself: avoid "however", change a saint with "which" instead of "who", structure a sentence that makes no sense. Perhaps say that Laguna ... is a lake? I don't care much for "See also", - why these items not others? Better link the list of volcanoes somewhere prominently, - compare Monnow Bridge. - The image is licensed and a good illustration. I don't like "may" in a hook, so prefer the original. Perhaps add or use instead the more cultural sunrise thing? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:44, 14 June 2017 (UTC)

@Gerda Arendt: Did some corrections, but I don't know of a more prominent place for the volcano list. I think that a hook on the sunrise may be a bit too long when made interesting? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 15:04, 14 June 2017 (UTC)

I tried "prominent", revert if you don't like it. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:15, 14 June 2017 (UTC)