Template:Did you know nominations/Church of St. Augustine, Goa

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:10, 18 July 2017 (UTC)

Church of St. Augustine, Goa[edit]

Church of St. Augustine ruins
Church of St. Augustine ruins

Created by Jupitus Smart (talk). Self-nominated at 05:20, 30 June 2017 (UTC).

  • Age, length and policy adherence are good. Image works well, QPQ done. Hook is good, but the article kind of leaves the reader hanging as to what the final conclusion was, and doesn't explicitly confirm the hook (though as much can be inferred). Perhaps an additional sentence in the second-to-last paragraph mentioning the final published study (DOI 10.1016/j.mito.2013.12.002) and qualifying the find (likely but not 100% confirmed) would help clarify things? --Paul_012 (talk) 15:03, 30 June 2017 (UTC)
I fully agree with your conclusions @Paul 012:. I have added the final deduction to the article and have changed the hook to be technically correct. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jupitus Smart (talkcontribs) 15:40, 30 June 2017 (UTC)
  • Okay, good to go. --Paul_012 (talk) 16:01, 30 June 2017 (UTC) PS I've modified the caption so that it will more readily identify the subject in the context of the DYK box. --Paul_012 (talk) 16:05, 30 June 2017 (UTC)