The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
Overall: No issues at all here. Happy to pass. However, although cited and I think it's interesting, I suggest putting in an ALT1 with another fact about this album. The fact it exists is interesting in itself but good to include something else. Also needs QPQ. Arcahaeoindris (talk) 16:58, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
Arcahaeoindris, how about a simple rephrase, "...that as a gift for his son Duncan, who was seven at the time, David Bowie narrated a version etc..." The gift for the son is the hook, no? Wait: that is ALT1, yours I suppose--OK, I agree with that, as a matter of interest, though fronting the gift and the son might generate more interest. I also think sticking in the son's age is a nice touch; it makes us think of Bowie as the father of a young child. Drmies (talk) 17:31, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
Added an ALT1 and reviewed another nom for QPQ :-) – zmbro(talk) (cont) 17:40, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
No issues at all here. Happy to pass. However, although cited and I think it's interesting, I suggest putting in an ALT1 with another fact about this album. The fact it exists is interesting in itself but good to include something else. Also needs QPQ. Arcahaeoindris (talk) 16:58, 7 January 2024 (UTC)