Template:Did you know nominations/Freedom: First Resistance
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The result was: promoted by Ohc ¡digame! 07:56, 5 February 2014 (UTC)
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Freedom: First Resistance[edit]
- The third-person action-adventure video game Freedom: First Resistance was based on Anne McCaffrey's novel trilogy titled Catteni Series?
Created by Paviliolive (talk). Self nominated at 00:45, 1 February 2014 (UTC).
New reviewer, so a second opinion might be good. The hook sounds fine, but the title should be italicized. Created from scratch yesterday, >2000 characters. My only objection would be that providing two negative reviews as examples of "moderate reviews" doesn't seem neutral. Metacritic says reception was "generally unfavorable", so unless there's a better source, can that section be adjusted? Other than that, looks good to me. KarronFR (talk) 21:25, 1 February 2014 (UTC)
- * Thank you kindly for your review, KarronFR. I struggled a bit with how to phrase the game's reception when writing the article. While the game's "score" in most publications was low, and most coverage of the game was about its flaws, there were often a few positive remarks about the game's viual performance. Looking back, it's not enough to warrant "moderate reviews." I've revised to "Freedom: First Resistance received generally poor reviews." Anything else I should fix up? Paviliolive (talk) 16:34, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
