Template:Did you know nominations/Furcifer timoni

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The result was: rejected by Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:27, 3 December 2012 (UTC)

Furcifer timoni[edit]

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... that the Furcifer timoni can only be found over an area of 385 square kilometres (149 sq mi) in the Amber Mountain National Park?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Cyclone Osea

Created/expanded by Thine Antique Pen (talk). Self nom at 12:27, 12 November 2012 (UTC)

Not a full review, but let me just point out that the hook talks about an area, but the SI units are for lengths. Also, a QPQ is required. Schwede 66 11:48, 19 November 2012 (UTC)

I have rephrased the first paragraph of "Distribution and habitat" but the second paragraph is garbled and unsatisfactory. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:38, 19 November 2012 (UTC)

New article, just long enough (really only just), duplication detector is clean. I've also done a bit of tidying up, but the garbled second paragraph needs some attention. One of the sources states that Furcifer timoni is named after one of the researcher's sons, and that would be worth adding to the article. Hook needs fixing and QPQ is required, as is stated above. Not much left to do before we can give this the big tick. Schwede 66 09:53, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

Hook fixed, and the QPQ is already linked above. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 16:50, 20 November 2012 (UTC)

There have been no subsequent edits to fix the "garbled second paragraph" cited by both Cwmhiraeth and Schwede66, which is still holding back this review. When are you planning to address this? BlueMoonset (talk) 08:11, 25 November 2012 (UTC)