Template:Did you know nominations/Georgiana Simpson

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 13:19, 24 February 2016 (UTC)

Georgiana Simpson[edit]

Georgiana Simpson in academic dress, 1921
Georgiana Simpson in academic dress, 1921

Created by I JethroBT (talk). Self-nominated at 12:02, 13 February 2016 (UTC).

Well referenced and neutral. Picture is free. Both hooks are sound but the first is more pithy and more interesting in my view. Unfortunately, it's not nearly long enough at around 3000 characters excluding headings, quotes, captions etc. It was about 1000 characters in April 2015 so will need to be expanded to around 5000 to qualify as a 5x expansion. I will review it for close paraphrasing etc if it is expanded to the necessary size. Philafrenzy (talk) 09:52, 14 February 2016 (UTC)
@Philafrenzy: No expansion should be needed; the article is new, as it was moved from my userspace on 13 Feburary 2016 ([1]). I, JethroBT drop me a line 12:02, 14 February 2016 (UTC)
OK, I will look again later. Philafrenzy (talk) 12:04, 14 February 2016 (UTC)
@Philafrenzy: When you are available, can you review this again? Thanks, I, JethroBT drop me a line 23:26, 21 February 2016 (UTC)
AGF on offline sources. No close paraphrasing or copy-vios detected. On reflection, I am unsure about the claim that she was the first. The Root doesn't say who was first nor does the book by Vivian M. May which is available on Google Books. Is it in African American Firsts and does that book comment on Sadie Mossell Alexander and Eva Dykes? Philafrenzy (talk) 22:23, 23 February 2016 (UTC)
@Philafrenzy: From The Root: Dykes completed the requirements first, but Simpson, thanks to an earlier commencement, was the first to get her degree. As for the May source, that doesn't go into the "who received it first" details, but merely states the degree she received, her age, and the year. But I'm confused, the other source supporting that Simpson received her PhD first is not the May source, but the Potter source. These are currently cited correctly as well. Is there some other issue I'm missing? I, JethroBT drop me a line 06:50, 24 February 2016 (UTC)
I see it now in The Root. Good to go. Philafrenzy (talk) 10:34, 24 February 2016 (UTC)