Template:Did you know nominations/Gerry Hewson

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 14:05, 5 November 2011 (UTC)

Gerry Hewson[edit]

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... that a nude picture of 1996 Summer Paralympics gold medallist Gerry Hewson and his pregnant wife was published by Time Out New York?

Reviewed: Richard M. Sims, Jr.

Created/expanded by LauraHale (talk). Nominated by Hawkeye7 (talk) at 09:49, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

Article review
Length	Newness	Adequate citations	Formatted citations	Reliable sources	Neutrality	Plagiarism
Only just... 2KB of text by my count. — Joseph Fox	25 Oct, all cool. — Joseph Fox	Seems okay. Could be better. — Joseph Fox	Maybe add some links to the publishers, if possible. — Joseph Fox	Aye, think so. — Joseph Fox	I think "Paralympic inspiration" could go in another section. Seems a bit POV to my taste.	None that I can see. — Joseph Fox

Hook review
Format	Citation	Neutrality	Interest
Looks okay. — Joseph Fox	Fortunately it's very well cited, bit of a risque hook otherwise. — Joseph Fox	Not really an issue. — Joseph Fox	Certainly. — Joseph Fox

Tentative DYK blue tickmark thingy. Best of luck, — Joseph Fox 11:04, 27 October 2011 (UTC)

Comment: Added additional text and content to the article. Subject heading changed to remove possible POV issues. The picture does not appear on the page and when the source is viewed, the picture has all the appropriate bits covered up. I wouldn't necessarily say it is completely work safe but shouldn't be that problematic. Added links to some publishers in the references section. --LauraHale (talk) 19:38, 27 October 2011 (UTC)