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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 17:58, 30 December 2011 (UTC)

Gregory Lee Johnson[edit]

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  • Reviewed: (first-ever nomination)

Created/expanded by Fat man rolling (talk). Self nom at 12:55, 16 December 2011 (UTC)

  • Length and recency check out, hook is interesting, article is well-written and neutral. However, the text of the article does not support the claim "...was notorious in political activist circles for...", merely that one person stated he used to do this. The hook, could, of course, be changed to reflect the facts as given in the article, if notoriety cannot be demonstrated. Hook also need amending to match the current name of the article, but that's a minor issue. Anaxial (talk) 21:59, 17 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Hook is 302 characters, when it must be less than 200 characters including spaces, ellipsis and question mark. Hook also needs to be revised for length. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:05, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Just for future reference, according to Rule C8, "The three ellipsis points and the space before 'that' do not count towards the hook length." MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 10:36, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Thanks. It's an important point, especially when dealing with hooks on the borderline. In this case, it reduces the length to 298 characters, which is still far too long for a hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 13:16, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
  • It looks like the reviewer approved the article, and the only issue is the "notorious" in the hook, as well as its length. How about the following, which is 193 characters?
  • ALT1: ... that Gregory Lee Johnson, who won a landmark freedom of speech case after being jailed for flag burning, was said to show up at every local protest with a bloody, severed pig's head on a leash? MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 23:10, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Sorry about the delay, limited Internet access over the holidays. ALT2, ALT3, ALT4 are more possible fixes, all at or under 200 characters (Gregory Lee Johnson commonly goes by Joey Johnson). fat man rolling (talk) 10:40, 29 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Adding tickmark because everything seems to have been sorted out. IMO, the word "all" should be removed from "show up at all local protests" -- that's an unnecessary detail (and it's probably not true, even if his associate used the word). --Orlady (talk) 17:27, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
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