Template:Did you know nominations/Ichirizuka

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The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:07, 27 July 2012 (UTC)

Ichirizuka[edit]

Woodblock print by Hiroshige

Created/expanded by Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk). Self nom at 01:45, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

  • QPQ done. Images have acceptable copyright. Hook properly formatted. Article completely supported by inline citations. Article is neutral enough.
  • this is cited in support of hook fact and I cannot find the text in the source that does it. Please clarify. --LauraHale (talk) 07:55, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Clarify where hook fact comes from and where sources supporting it found in the article. --LauraHale (talk) 07:55, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, wondered if this would get flagged; it's corroborated here (as well as in a couple of the other refs), which is the ref for the Edo point at the end of the establishment section; per, er, synecdoche (of the totum pro parte variety), this second mention of "Edo" stands is in this context for "Nihonbashi (in Edo)", as introduced in the lead; can't really overload the lead section with refs as that sentence is an amalgam of points from a number of sources; and can't put Nihonbashi in the later Edo point as that's about Edo as opposed to Kyoto... Perhaps close enough to get away with it? Thanks, Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk) 17:10, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
Suggestion: Write article more summary style so lead doesn't need to be cited. Then overload the body with citations as required. Hook fact needs to be validated. --LauraHale (talk) 21:13, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
Have duplicated the ref, so hopefully now even more compliant, Maculosae tegmine lyncis (talk) 18:40, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
Sorry for taking so long to respond. Didn't see the comment. What text in the article supports the hook again? I cannot find it. :( --LauraHale (talk) 22:45, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
  • Sorry for butting in. Hook is properly verified here. Not counting the quotes the article is just long enough; I made a few minor edits. Maculosae, article can easily be expanded, IMO. Good to go, Drmies (talk) 02:49, 25 July 2012 (UTC)