Template:Did you know nominations/Jarl André Storbæk

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 23:35, 21 September 2012 (UTC)

Jarl André Storbæk[edit]

Storbæk while playing for Vålerenga in 2009

Created/expanded by Mentoz86 (talk), 81.167.123.52 (talk). Nominated by Mentoz86 (talk) at 21:27, 17 September 2012 (UTC)

  • Hook fact is footnoted, but hook source is off-line and not in English, hence AGF. Hook short enough. Article expansion long enough. Refs, none in English, all posted in proper format. No neutrality or BLP concerns. Random googling of various sentences indicated no concerns related to copyright violations or plagiarism in the article. One minor thing is that "After playing for Østre Trysil as a kid,..." seems chatty and non-specific, and may be better rephrased or written to specify when/age, but this should not affect DYK. Suggested pic is good to use. Good to go. --PFHLai (talk) 09:13, 21 September 2012 (UTC)