Template:Did you know nominations/Jean Trogneux

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:26, 31 May 2017 (UTC)

Jean Trogneux[edit]

Jean Trogneux shop
Jean Trogneux shop

Created by Edwardx (talk). Self-nominated at 22:33, 16 May 2017 (UTC).

Interest facts, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I am surprised about the article's organization, with a rather long "lead", which is not a summary, then "History" last, and one paragraph of only one sentence. The stub-tag should go. How about writing a real lead, and having more chronology? - The image is licensed, but not too specific, - I think we might stay with the quirky wordplay ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:53, 19 May 2017 (UTC)
Thank you Gerda Arendt, for the review, and I'm pleased you enjoyed the wordplay. I've done a QPQ and will look again at the article's organization. Edwardx (talk) 12:28, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
Quite right about the organization, which I've now sorted out, as well as adding my own English translation of the French quote. Edwardx (talk) 12:46, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:55, 25 May 2017 (UTC)