Template:Did you know nominations/John Clark Mayden

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 03:33, 13 January 2021 (UTC)

John Clark Mayden

Created by JGHowes (talk). Self-nominated at 23:17, 24 December 2020 (UTC).

  • Created recently, long enough, no copyvio, neutral. QPQ done. ALT0 is more interesting; I've removed an unneeded comma from it. Source verifies the hook and is cited inline in the article. Just two nitpicks:
  • His photographs appear in the HBO film Between the World and Me would be better as His photographs appear in the HBO film adaptation of Between the World and Me (article is about the book, only a section is about the film).
  • "The film is based on ..." needs a source by DYK rules, even if it's the one for the previous sentence or a primary source.
Bilorv (talk) 20:12, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
@Bilorv: Many thanks for your review. I've made the suggested edits. —  JGHowes  talk 22:32, 27 December 2020 (UTC)
ALT0 approved, thanks for the quick response. — Bilorv (talk) 23:33, 27 December 2020 (UTC)