Template:Did you know nominations/John Robinson (aviator)
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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:20, 27 August 2014 (UTC)
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John Robinson (aviator)[edit]
- ... that aviator John Robinson (pictured) was initially a janitor at the first aviation school he attended?
- ALT1:... that aviator John Robinson (pictured) was asked to prepare more than a dozen weaponless planes in Ethiopia for combat against Italian forces?
- Reviewed: Family Building Society
- Comment: Expansion began on 28 July 2014, and was completed on 31 July 2014
5x expanded by StormBattalion3414 (talk), I JethroBT (talk). Nominated by I JethroBT (talk) at 01:36, 1 August 2014 (UTC).
Expanded well enough in general, but I worry about the Ethiopia section with its expand section tag. The hooks are cited and the article is long enough, but I have this hanging concern about the Ethiopia section. If that is resolved this will be an excellent article for DYK. I personally prefer ALT1 as the hook. Raymie (t • c) 03:10, 6 August 2014 (UTC)
- I can't update this section today, but will get to it later this week. Thanks, I, JethroBT drop me a line 20:30, 20 August 2014 (UTC)
- @Raymie: Finished with the expansion. I, JethroBT drop me a line 08:32, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
