Template:Did you know nominations/Joseph S. Clark's and Robert F. Kennedy's tour of the Mississippi Delta

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:16, 28 October 2016 (UTC)

Joseph S. Clark's and Robert F. Kennedy's tour of the Mississippi Delta

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• ... that Joseph S. Clark's and Robert F. Kennedy's tour of the Mississippi Delta in 1967 made hunger a public issue in the United States?

Moved to mainspace by Indy beetle (talk). Self-nominated at 02:32, 14 October 2016 (UTC).

• Hook is interesting and cited in an offline source. Article is new and has no general policy issues, but does need additional review. Since this is your first DYK, I would suggest you reduce the size of the main link. My proposal: ALT1 ... that U.S. senators Joseph S. Clark and Robert F. Kennedy toured the Mississippi Delta in 1967 and made hunger a public issue in the United States as a result? SounderBruce 22:36, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
• Comment: Noted and done.Indy beetle (talk) 23:21, 20 October 2016 (UTC)

• @Indy beetle: I restored your original hook to maintain the integrity of this thread. Please always post new suggestions at the end of the thread, rather than changing the original hook. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 21:05, 25 October 2016 (UTC)