Template:Did you know nominations/Kansas Saloon Smashers
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The result was: promoted by EEng (talk) 21:46, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
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Kansas Saloon Smashers[edit]
- ... that the plot of the film Kansas Saloon Smashers was based on an editorial cartoon?
Created by Taylor Trescott (talk). Self nominated at 18:09, 21 June 2014 (UTC).
Article is large and new enough. Correct person credited. There does seem to be a bias in the film against Carrie Nation, but it just seems to be reported as fact without justification or interpretation. So neutral enough. Everything apart from the plot is cited, presumably the plot is cited by the film. Hook is short enough, the hook however is quite dry and unclear but does appear in article and has a citation. Referencing is done in annoying way so it makes it harder to follow up on the citation verification. However fact is confirmed. Also no copyright infringement detected. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 11:32, 25 June 2014 (UTC)
- Hi Graeme Bartlett. I tried making the hook clearer without making it in un-hooky. How does it look? Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 13:03, 25 June 2014 (UTC)
I will also confirm the QPQ was done. Anyway the revised hook is still short enough, and is now clearer. So I will say good to go. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 22:07, 25 June 2014 (UTC)
Hook verified at source. To prep1 as
- ... that the plot of the 1901 film Kansas Saloon Smashers was based on an editorial cartoon?