Template:Did you know nominations/Kara Laricks

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 21:24, 31 May 2012 (UTC)

Kara Laricks[edit]

Created/expanded by SarahStierch (talk). Self nom at 16:34, 17 May 2012 (UTC)

  • Hook and expansion are both fine; though the article itself might want to make it clearer what Fashion Star is (I initially assumed it was one of those Top Model-style shows, so perhaps an aside at its first mention like "American fashion design series Fashion Star" or words to that effect). You might also find that Japanese street fashion would be a better link than just street fashion. GRAPPLE X 20:12, 31 May 2012 (UTC)