Template:Did you know nominations/Letter of Ali ibn Abi Talib to Malik al-Ashtar
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:24, 15 November 2018 (UTC)
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Letter of Ali ibn Abi Talib to Malik al-Ashtar[edit]
- ... that the letterauthored by Ali, the first Shia Imam, to Malik al-Ashtar, governor of Egypt, includes a model for governing based on justice for every place and every time? [1][2][3]
Created by Saff V. (talk). Self-nominated at 08:21, 1 September 2018 (UTC).
- Comment:
The article is long and new enough. However, I prefer to ask you resolve the grammatical issues and do the required technical edits (mostly removing extra spaces and adding them where ever needed), before making any further comments. Let me know when you're finished with it. --Mhhossein talk 14:21, 16 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Mhhossein: thanks for review the DYK. As you nominated to grammatical issues, I asked GorgeCustersSabre help me and he do the copy edit.I think during this time I get oppurtunity to remove other issues. Regards! Saff V. (talk) 11:44, 18 September 2018 (UTC)
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- Comment: I have systematically copy-edited this article and checked the citations to ensure that they are accurate. I'm now content that this article is strong enough to remain on Wikipedia without any distinct concerns. Best regards,George Custer's Sabre (talk) 01:52, 23 September 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for your help. However, I think the article still needs to be checked against accuracy of the materials. For instance, I doubt if "In his letter, Ali asked the people of Egypt to follow the direction of Malik." Check the source once again. --Mhhossein talk 17:16, 30 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Mhhossein: You are right! I campare this two sources (1 and 2) a part of the adventure has been missed!Imam wrote two letter, one for Malic and another for other commander and the sentence that you nominated it is seen in the letter that Imam wrote to another commander, but the exact name of the commander is unknown. All in all I prefer to remove such as challenging sentence.Also I check the article with refrecences and try to solve such as problem. Saff V. (talk) 11:46, 1 October 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for your help. However, I think the article still needs to be checked against accuracy of the materials. For instance, I doubt if "In his letter, Ali asked the people of Egypt to follow the direction of Malik." Check the source once again. --Mhhossein talk 17:16, 30 September 2018 (UTC)
- Saff V., it's been a month. Have you solved the issues yet? If so, please say so here, so that Mhhossein knows to review the changes to see if the issues are adequately addressed. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:52, 1 November 2018 (UTC)
