Template:Did you know nominations/Lorin Whitney

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:12, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Lorin Whitney

Created by JGHowes (talk). Self-nominated at 12:55, 16 March 2021 (UTC).

Interesting life, on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I like ALT1 best, speaking of him, not only his studio. - In the article, "California" is repeated often, as dab of place names, - I dropped one, and perhaps more could go. A thought about the good image, but obviously he isn't pictured at the age when the hook plays. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:31, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Gerda, thanks for the review. As suggested, I've trimmed the repetitive mentions of Calif. And I agree that the ALT1 hook is the best.  JGHowes  talk 12:59, 24 March 2021 (UTC)