Template:Did you know nominations/Mercedes-Benz Vision EQXX

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 20:31, 16 January 2023 (UTC)

Mercedes-Benz Vision EQXX

The Vision EQXX
The Vision EQXX

Created by X750 (talk). Self-nominated at 07:03, 10 January 2023 (UTC).

  • Hi sorry just a comment I actually creates this article on 7 Jan, should I put the nomination that section? Am new to this... X750. Spin a yarn? Articles I've screwed over? 07:07, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
    • @X750: All good, I'll move it to the right place and post a review shortly. Hameltion (talk, contribs) 17:44, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
  • New enough, long enough, well written and sourced. No copyvio, image looks good. This appears to be your second Third DYK, so no QPQ required. I made some small edits myself, hope they're all good. In the #Overview section, there is a bit of accidental redundancy (in particular, this group and its contribution are mentioned twice). And you say "Changes included ..." ... changes to what? Overall nice article.
  • Any hook is going to be slightly promotional, but what else are you gonna do with this kind of topic. ALT0 works, but I might refine it slightly:
    • ALT2: ... that the one-off Mercedes-Benz Vision EQXX concept car (pictured) can travel over 1,000 km (621 mi) on a single charge? "One-off" is cited in (e.g.) [1]
  • ALT1 is interesting but the source doesn't seem to support that definitive a claim (also the "lowest" part of the hook is absent from the article, but anyway not recommending to use this hook) Again, well done! Hameltion (talk, contribs) 18:30, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Yeah no problem mate, do whatever you feel would be best for DYK. You know more than me. Also, minor correction, it is my third nomination but still no QPQ. Maybe I'll add the lowest thing in when this article reaches GA status. Cheers Hameltion. X750. Spin a yarn? Articles I've screwed over? 20:22, 11 January 2023 (UTC)