Template:Did you know nominations/Mildmay Mission Hospital

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The result was: promoted by PrimalMustelid talk 04:08, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

Mildmay Mission Hospital

Created by Fvasconcellos (talk). Self-nominated at 06:17, 17 February 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Mildmay Mission Hospital; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • Article is new enough and long enough. I am afraid that by using a 28 page source as a reference it is hard to verify anything; I can't find about the funding structure, for example, and the article makes it sound like it was a 2021 assessment that called it outstanding while the source seems to say 2017. Where does it say first of its kind in #4? Going to AGF on the book. Where is "preservation of the character and associations of the hospital" in the source? Didn't notice any copyvio or plagiarism. I prefer the first hook. No QPQ needed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:18, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Thank you so much for taking the time to review this. I appreciate it can be hard to comb through that report, so I've added page numbers. I've reworded and added a new citation for the funding structure, clarified the 2017/2021 issue, and added/rearranged citations to address the other points. The "preservation..." was indeed missing a proper citation, which I've now added as well, and reworded that passage to make it closer to the source (hopefully not to the point of close paraphrasing). Best, Fvasconcellos (t·c) 18:29, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 15:28, 19 February 2024 (UTC)