Template:Did you know nominations/Nellie Miller-Mann
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 20:54, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
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Nellie Miller-Mann[edit]
- ... that relief worker Nellie Miller-Mann (pictured) wrote in her diary about the plight of the many orphans she cared for?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Czech Radio
- Comment: To the right is another PD photograph that can be used as an alternative:
Created by EtienneDolet (talk). Self nominated at 06:09, 15 April 2014 (UTC).
- Review begun. AshLin (talk) 08:37, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
- Newly created & nominated within 5 days. Adequate length. Prose size (text only): 5309 characters (881 words) "readable prose size".
- Neutral. Inline citation. Assuming good faith about verifying and paraphrasing as regards offline refs.
- Hook not impactful. Please consider a more impactful alt. Perhaps her helping hundreds of orphans of the Armenian Genocide could be the basis of a better alt hook.
for now.
Good to go. Improved hook. AshLin (talk) 17:32, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that relief worker Nellie Miller-Mann (pictured) cared for hundreds of Armenian
refugeesorphans who had survived the Armenian Genocide?
- ALT1 ... that relief worker Nellie Miller-Mann (pictured) cared for hundreds of Armenian