Template:Did you know nominations/Noynoying

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The result was: rejected by Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:22, 18 April 2012 (UTC)
Paraphrasing

Noynoying

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• ... that during Newshours coverage about Noynoying protests, accusing Philippine President Benigno Aquino III of being idle on the job, presenter Paul Henley wrapped the program by playing "The Lazy Song" by Bruno Mars?

Created/expanded by Starczamora (talk). Self nom at 15:26, 28 March 2012 (UTC)

• Several long-standing orange content tags. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:47, 6 April 2012 (UTC)

• content tags have been removed article was created on March 18 and then expanded 5x in a small period of time. -- Esemono (talk) 03:38, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

• Hook: Interesting, short enough, AGF as my connection cannot handle streaming video.

Article: Falls outside the 5 day limit, but nominator is not very experienced with DYK (and may be quite rusty as his/her last DYK was in 2008). Long enough. Referencing needs improvement (first two paragraphs of #First documented by media, 2011 are uncited, for example. Paraphrasing check on this source shows issues (An example: Article: "This protest activity was also created in response to warnings that protesters caught planking on the streets would be arrested."; source: "... the new gimmick was in response to warnings that protesters who would be seen planking on the streets would be arrested.")

Summary: The article needs to be better referenced and paraphrased. Remember to check all sources for paraphrasing issues, as the above was only an example. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:16, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

• Editor has not resolved issues, despite being active. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:16, 15 April 2012 (UTC)