Template:Did you know nominations/Osiris: New Dawn

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:54, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

Osiris: New Dawn[edit]

Created by Anarchyte (talk). Self-nominated at 07:08, 19 September 2016 (UTC).

  • Long enough. New enough. Well written. Citations throughout. Neutral enough (although I'd like it to be a bit more dispassionate.) I'm not a gamer so I can't really judge the reputability of the sources. AGF here. I see one minor problem: in the last sentence that says "it was praised by critics", can you add citations to multiple critics? The current citation refers to one reviewer's take, and I'm not sure if Destructoid is a reputable source. Or you can just rewrite the sentence. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 00:03, 3 October 2016 (UTC)
@Hybernator: Thanks for the review and apologies for the late response. The references are reliable (see WP:VG/RS) and I've rewritten that sentence. Anarchyte (work | talk) 08:35, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
  • Updates check out. GTG. Hybernator (talk) 20:48, 15 October 2016 (UTC)