Template:Did you know nominations/Puisi Tak Terkuburkan

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 14:19, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

Puisi Tak Terkuburkan[edit]

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... that Garin Nugroho's family was worried that he could be killed for his reinterpretation of "the wounds of history" in Puisi Tak Terkuburkan?

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 16:40, 21 October 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed: All of Creation (song)

Date, expansion, referencing fine, no plagiarism spotted. Hook interesting, but might it hint at "film"? In the lead of the article, clarify "went to Ibrahim Kadir who, a poet played himself" please and perhaps drop an "also", --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:19, 7 November 2011 (UTC)

I don't think that having "film" in the hook is too important, as it was the fact that he was discussing the subject, not explicitly because it was a film. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:30, 7 November 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the lead, though. Good point; I had kept the previous stub as a lead. Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:32, 7 November 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, good to go, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:39, 7 November 2011 (UTC)