Template:Did you know nominations/Qawsun, al-Mansur Abu Bakr, al-Ashraf Kujuk

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The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 05:59, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

Qawsun, al-Mansur Abu Bakr, al-Ashraf Kujuk

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• ... that the Mamluk emir Qawsun had Sultan al-Mansur Abu Bakr deposed, executed and replaced by the latter's five-year-old half-brother al-Ashraf Kujuk?

• Reviewed: Naoum Mokarzel, Cerro Quiac, Olga Tufnell

Created/expanded by Al Ameer son (talk). Self-nominated at 23:19, 28 February 2016 (UTC).

• All three articles are new enough, long enough, neutral, and well written. Hook is interesting and supported with academic sources. The word "infant" is not entirely accurate, however, as Kujuk was five years old when he was installed on the throne, a bit older than the most common definition of infant. No copyvio detected. Still awaiting three QPQs. -Zanhe (talk) 17:34, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

One more thing I forgot to mention: the word "his" in the hook is ambiguous. It could be misinterpreted as Qawsun's. -Zanhe (talk) 19:12, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

I adjusted the hook and added a QPQ. Two One more to go. --Al Ameer (talk) 18:18, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

@Zanhe: All QPQs are done now. --Al Ameer (talk) 02:16, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

@Al Ameer son: Thanks. Could you take care of the word "infant", why not just say 5-year-old? -Zanhe (talk) 05:08, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

@Zanhe: Forgot about that. It's done now. --Al Ameer (talk) 07:06, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

• Thanks. Good to go. -Zanhe (talk) 07:08, 5 March 2016 (UTC)