Template:Did you know nominations/Redmond-Bend Juniper State Scenic Corridor

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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:48, 3 October 2014 (UTC)

Redmond–Bend Juniper State Scenic Corridor[edit]

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... that the Redmond–Bend Juniper State Scenic Corridor serves as a buffer of natural high desert habitat along U.S. Route 97 between the cities of Bend and Redmond in central Oregon?

Reviewed: Temple of Justice (Washington)

Created/expanded by Orygun (talk). Self nominated at 04:17, 20 September 2014 (UTC).

Creation date OK; 7655 B length good; every paragraph other than lede is referenced. No evidence of close paraphrasing. 178 B hook good, sources accepted AGF (#1 and #2 not online, #3 does not mention scenic corridor but does confirm "high desert"). Nom QPQ review of Temple of Justice (Washington) checks. The only significant issue I see is the Geo-location error section -- as worded this looks a little WP:OR-ish. Can this be re-done to make it look less like the Wikipedia editor is speaking? Brianhe (talk) 21:27, 1 October 2014 (UTC)

Good comment. I removed last sentence; believe that effectively keeps text focused on basic facts.--Orygun (talk) 03:37, 2 October 2014 (UTC)

Looks good now. - Brianhe (talk) 13:47, 2 October 2014 (UTC)