Template:Did you know nominations/Riley Adams (baseball)

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 06:19, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

Riley Adams (baseball)[edit]

Created by Muboshgu (talk). Self-nominated at 00:08, 1 August 2017 (UTC).

  • @Muboshgu: New, long enough, well sourced, QPQ done, interesting hook. Good to go. As a general matter, I'd pay a bit of attention to your prose in the future: lots of sentences that begin with either "Adams" or "He," when you could change it up some to make it more fluid. --Usernameunique (talk) 04:50, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
  • Fair point about the prose. I wrote it a bit hastily. It'll improve. – Muboshgu (talk) 05:11, 1 August 2017 (UTC)