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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:14, 23 January 2020 (UTC)

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Roie Galitz

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Roie Galitz
Roie Galitz
  • ... that Roie Galitz (pictured), a wildlife photographer, founded the biggest photography school in Israel? Source: "גליץ, נשוי ואב לארבעה, עזב אז את העבודה שנתנה לו שקט כלכלי ופתח את "גליץ בית ספר לצילום", שלימים הפך לבית הספר הגדול בארץ ואחד מהגדולים בעולם. מאז הקמתו סיימו בו כ־23 אלף בוגרים ב־1,300 מחזורי לימוד."[1]

Created by Ynhockey (talk). Self-nominated at 21:11, 16 December 2019 (UTC).

  • The article has been created within a week before nomination, is more than 1,500 characters long (readable prose), hasn't been featured before and prose doesn't have issues. Though there are 2 inline dispute tags to be taken care of. About the hook, the first one interests me more.. the source is in Hebrew so I am unable to interpret it, but I would AGF; a few other websites showing up in an English Google search do support the claim. Maybe add a wikilink for Israel. An alternative hook can be:

@Ynhockey: Just checked on this again, there has been no activity here since weeks. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:26, 8 January 2020 (UTC)

@Sainsf: Hey, thanks for pinging me. I am OK with either of the hooks. Are there any issues that need to be worked out? (it seems that both are sourced). —Ynhockey (Talk) 20:45, 8 January 2020 (UTC)
The issues are mentioned above - the inline tags. Sourcing isn't an issue. I think ALT2 would be more interesting. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:59, 9 January 2020 (UTC)
  • @Evrik: If you mean the CN tag, I have removed the small fact that required a citation. If I find a citation for it later, I will re-add it. —Ynhockey (Talk) 20:45, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
  • @Sainsf: How does it look now? --evrik (talk) 20:53, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but I'm getting weary of hooks that tout "first", "biggest", "only", etc. I'd like to promote ALT1 but add some more color to it, like this:
  • ALT1a: ... that Israeli wildlife photographer Roie Galitz won first place at the Siena International Photo Awards in the "Fragile Ice" category for his picture of a sleeping polar bear? Yoninah (talk) 21:46, 15 January 2020 (UTC)
@Yoninah: This hook is also great, what do you think @Ynhockey:? Sainsf (talk · contribs) 03:04, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
This is fine from my point of view. —Ynhockey (Talk) 11:35, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks. @Sainsf: could you review ALT1a please? Yoninah (talk) 17:03, 18 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Reviewer needed for ALT1a (which was the second hook called ALT2, hence the renaming, since it is a modified version of ALT1). Given the addition by Yoninah, someone else should probably do the promotion to prep once this has been approved. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:40, 22 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Sorry for the delay. As noted earlier article meets DYK criteria, cleanup tags taken care of, hook is interesting and cited inline (is just a better version of ALT1). Good to go. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:03, 22 January 2020 (UTC)
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