Template:Did you know nominations/Somnath Sharma

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:23, 8 April 2017 (UTC)

Somnath Sharma

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• ... that Major Somnath Sharma, a Param Vir Chakra recipient, and General Vishwa Nath Sharma, former chief of the Indian Army, were brothers? Source: (Chakravorty 1995, pp. 75–76)
  • ALT1:... that a crude oil tanker was named after Major Somnath Sharma, a Param Vir Chakra recipient? Source: Marine Traffic
  • ALT2:... that Major Somnath Sharma, a Param Vir Chakra recipient, along with company fought 700 infiltrators in an operation during Indo-Pakistani War of 1947? Source: (Chakravorty 1995, pp. 75–76)
  • ALT3:... that Major Somnath Sharma, a Param Vir Chakra recipient, was also mentioned in despatches for his actions during the Arakan Campaign? Source: Rediff

• Reviewed: Michael I of Wallachia

Improved to Good Article status by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk). Self-nominated at 03:20, 29 March 2017 (UTC).

• A Good Article promoted by the nominator, well written, Earwig check returned similarities which relate to two quotes (of which one is a long one - both presented as quotes in the article), hooks cited inline, QPQ done. All hooks are good, but I would suggest the original hook. Good for promotion. jojo@nthony (talk) 07:39, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
• Returned from prep due to close paraphrasing from the source. While blocks of text are quoted directly, the following extract was put into the main text of the article without quotes:
• Source: Though mutilated beyond recognition, a few pages of the Gita that he always kept in his breast pocket and the empty leather holster of Tewari's pistol helped to identify the body.
• Article: Though it was disfigured beyond recognition, a few pages of the Bhagavad Gita that he always kept in his breast pocket, and the empty leather holster of his Tewari pistol, helped to identify the body.
• Yoninah (talk) 23:26, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

@Yoninah: Thanks for the review. I've fixed it. Please have a look. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:46, 8 April 2017 (UTC)

• Thanks. Restoring tick per Tachs' review. Yoninah (talk) 21:16, 8 April 2017 (UTC)