Template:Did you know nominations/Song Dong

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 12:09, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

Song Dong[edit]

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... that Chinese artist Song Dong (pictured) has responded to the destruction of historic buildings in Beijing by creating an edible city?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Maouri people

Created/expanded by Prioryman (talk). Self nom at 16:11, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

Expansion, refs, hook etc all check out. However, I'd like to see the article broken into sections; an article with several short sections is preferable to one that is just one unbroken section. Logical headers would probably place everything up to ref 1 as the lead; the next two paragraphs as one heading; the paragraph and blockquote on Beijing/edible art as another; and either the final two paragraphs as a heading each or together as one under a broader title. GRAPPLE X 20:54, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

Agreed - I've added some headers, an infobox and some images. Prioryman (talk) 22:44, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

Looks a lot better now. Image checks out fine for main page. GRAPPLE X 22:47, 11 July 2012 (UTC)