Template:Did you know nominations/Ten Portraits of Jews of the Twentieth Century

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:00, 26 June 2019 (UTC)

Ten Portraits of Jews of the Twentieth Century[edit]

Created by No Swan So Fine (talk). Self-nominated at 09:20, 31 May 2019 (UTC).

Interesting art, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. I see coming that someone will complain that the hook says something in Wikipedia voice as fact which is the writing of just one critic. Can you insert that in a hook? Or say something else, such mention some of the subjects, - I always like links to Kafka ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:38, 3 June 2019 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback. I love Kafka too! So much of the commentary on this series is overly negitive so I tried to choose a neutral quote. I've put the author (albiet anon) into the hook. No Swan So Fine (talk) 10:44, 8 June 2019 (UTC)
Thank you, problem now is grammar, because I read "the National Portrait Gallery in Andy Warhol's ...". Please try to get the bold link to the front, and the NPG later. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:54, 8 June 2019 (UTC)
Done. No Swan So Fine (talk) 07:42, 12 June 2019 (UTC)
Fine! Next time, please write alternatives, instead of changing the original, but I'm not in the mood for formalities ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:46, 12 June 2019 (UTC)