Template:Did you know nominations/The Nomad Soul

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:46, 13 July 2019 (UTC)

The Nomad Soul

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... that David Cage started writing the video game The Nomad Soul because he had grown tired of being a composer?

Reviewed: Mari Samuelsen
Comment: Promoted to GA on the submitted date. Hook is sourced with ref. 8 in the article.

Improved to Good Article status by Cognissonance (talk). Self-nominated at 15:57, 5 July 2019 (UTC).

Will be claiming this for review and will try to give the full review by tomorrow. For now, my main suggestion could be to mention the year of release, but this is optional and the hook works even without it. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 11:04, 6 July 2019 (UTC)

I previewed your suggestion, and it works fine, but the hook is easier to read without it. Cognissonance (talk) 16:30, 6 July 2019 (UTC)

@Narutolovehinata5: In case you forgot. Cognissonance (talk) 16:17, 9 July 2019 (UTC)

Seems fine to me and almost ready for approval. About my main issue is that there's no mentioned of the plot at all in the lede: even a short synopsis or summary should probably be there. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 01:28, 10 July 2019 (UTC)

@Narutolovehinata5: Done. Cognissonance (talk) 06:26, 10 July 2019 (UTC)

Thanks. Article was promoted to GA on time, DYK requirements check out, QPQ done, hook cited and verified. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 00:37, 12 July 2019 (UTC)