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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:39, 24 June 2017 (UTC)

Tian Qilang[edit]

Created by Kingoflettuce (talk). Self-nominated at 11:04, 7 June 2017 (UTC).

Interesting story, on good sources, Chinese and offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The hook is fine, unless you want to say assassin instead of killer. - Article: "unfortunate" (in the lead) seems a bit too harmless, perhaps tell a bit more, or find a better word. I don't in what turn "in turn" means there. Please find projects on the talk, and fix the errors of refs 1, 2 and 5 (spelling of author's name etc). --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:57, 16 June 2017 (UTC)
Suggest a better word? I think "unfortunate" is suffice. "In turn" is also perfectly fine. Projects on talk are not a prerequisite for DYK (you can do it if you please). What errors??? Last I checked the names are spelt just fine. Thanks Kingoflettuce (talk) 22:48, 16 June 2017 (UTC)
I fixed the referencing errors for you.
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:32, 17 June 2017 (UTC)
Ah, I see, much appreciated. I should have noticed them but they were such minor edits anyone (you in this case) could have done it. Tis' a community project after all. Cheers Kingoflettuce (talk) 07:39, 17 June 2017 (UTC)
I noticed that they were minor only I after I had to look deeper than noticing the big error messages. I was still unsure if the name of the author would have to be spelled this way or the other, but seem to have chosen the right one by using the more frequent one. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:49, 17 June 2017 (UTC)